need to work on:
Line energy, proportions, tension, sense of action, some interesting
line changes suggesting form.
What I don't like:
Not filtering out enough.
Too distracted by details.
Need more dimension to volumes.
Need to close corners--to much broken
line. More solidity.
Less of a photograph and more of an idea.
Friday, July 31, 2009
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